Voiceovers

Here are some examples of the voiceovers I was going to use in my film as narration.
https://soundcloud.com/katy-tierney-857980815/voiceover-1/s-nMvwl

https://soundcloud.com/katy-tierney-857980815/dance-voiceover/s-etSez

I let my target audience watch it with all the narration voiceovers in, and I didn't get a positive opinion e.g. 'think the voiceovers distracts you from the film than draw you in' and 'I think the voiceovers sound quite cringey which doesn't suit the film'. I then showed the audience the film without any of the narration but with the narration coming up in text on the screen. My audience preferred this as it was simpler and more enjoyable.Therefore I only had the backing music and a few sound effects in my film.